Monday, December 22, 2014

'Tis The Season

Our December starter sentence was provided by Jayne Ormerod.  Below you will see where it lead her. Merry Christmas to each and every one of you.



‘Tis the Season…

…of warm sugar cookies and jingle bells ringing;

of sleighs full of toys and carolers singing;

of Santas and Scrooges and tinsel and lights;

of long snowy walks with a loved one at night.

 

‘Tis the season of decking the halls with bright holly;

of cards sent from friends telling us to be jolly;

of silver and gold and eight tiny reindeer;

of cups of eggnog laced with holiday cheer.

 

‘Tis the season of watching It’s a Wonderful Life;

of celebrating the birth of our Lord, Jesus Christ;

of wisemen and angels and wreaths and a star;

of a Noble fir tree tied on top of a car.

 

‘Tis the season, my friend, when joy fills our hearts;

though military missions may keep us apart.

So when stockings are hung by the chimney with care,

‘Tis the season of Christmas, “Peace on Earth” is my prayer.

 

Friday, December 19, 2014

MEMBERS GIVE THE GIFT OF READING


EBWG Annual 2014 Contributions to Toys For Tots

 The Book Thief  Markus Zusak donated by Karen Harris
“My daughter read this when she was 16 and adored it. She wouldn’t leave me alone until I read it.”

 Found Margaret Peterson Haddix donated by MaryJac O’Daniel
“I got in touch with my former high school students to see what young adults were reading these days. This book seemed interesting.”

Thrones and Bones Lou Anders donated by Pat Clark
“It is a story about a half breed frost giant forced to survive in the wilderness. I thought it sounded good.”

 House of Robots James Patterson donated by Mike Owens
“I bought because I am amazed at the author’s variety of work.”

 A Hardy Boys mystery donated by Will Hopkins
“I hoped it might get a young person interested in a series.”

 How To Bake A Book Ella Burfoot
“I am a professional baker’s kid and a novice author. This book spoke to me on several different levels.”

 Ellie’s Christmas Karen Sapp and My Hootiful Life donated by Gina Buzby
“I love cute visual children’s books.”
Paddington Michael Bond and a Nancy Drew Starter set donated by Jayne Ormerod
“Paddington brings back childhood memories. And I hope I can get a young person interested in a mystery series.”
 
 

Tuesday, November 25, 2014

WELCOME NEW MEMBERS!

Karen Harris
Page O'Flaherty
Joni Giordino
Will Hopkins

Monday, November 17, 2014


Give thanks for our November meeting!
Friday, November 21 at 9:00am 
East Beach Bayfront Club
 
We will have a brainstorming session for the East Beach Anthology as well as welcome new members.
 
See you there! 

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Hampton Roads AuthorFest November 22 2014

On Saturday, November 22, there is an author signing event at the Central Branch of the Virginia Beach Public Library. The event is free and showcases 25 local authors from a variety of genres--there's something for everyone! More importantly, though, there are also a bunch of free presentations being given: 

SCHEDULE OF EVENTS 
10:00-11:00: The Secret of Writing Children's Books 
11:00 - 11:45: Going the Traditional Route: The Basics of Trade, Small, and Academic Press Publication 
11:45 - 12:30: How To Be A Successful Self-Published Author 
12:30 - 1:15: Design Your Own Book Trailer 
1:15 - 2:00: Punking Out: The Basics of Steampunk 
2:00 - 3:00: Joining The Cool Crowd: Writing Young Adult 
3:00 - 4:00: The Game of Love: Romance Reader Bingo 


EBWG members Jayne Ormerod and Lara Nance will be there... will you????

Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Au Revoir, Randi Klein

On Tuesday night Gina Buzby hosted an EBWG "Farewell" to founding scribe Randi Klein.  We all agreed it's not "goodbye" but "we'll meet again" this time at her writing retreat at the lake!  Thanks for all you did to get our group started, Randi!

Friday, October 24, 2014

HAPPY BIRTHDAY EBWG

One year ago today, on October 24, 2013, the first meeting of the East Bach Writers Guild met in the Bayfront Club Library. The founding members (Randi Klein, Gina Buzby and Sally Parrott) had met the previous month to develop the four cornerstones of the Guild:

  • Hold each other accountable for writing;
  • Encourage each other with positive, constructive comments;
  • Learn as much as possible about the craft of writing and share knowledge of writing techniques and resources for authors;
  • Motivate each other!
One year later, I think we've met those criteria, and more.

Looking forward to another great year, fellow EBWG writers! 

Monday, October 20, 2014

Starter Sentences

 Although we will continue sharing our starter sentences, we are changing the process.

1. October's starter sentence will be different! Gina Warren Buzby will be emailing a photo of one of her paintings to inspire us.

2. We will continue the rotation of one member providing the starter sentence for each month.

3. Monthly, an email with all our starter sentences will be sent to Guild members.

Keep Writing!

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

October Meeting

October Meeting
Friday, October 17, 9:00 PM
Bayfront Club
 
Agenda: Critique Submissions
 
Please bring your own cup

Thursday, October 9, 2014

East Beach Anthology


East Beach Anthology
Call for Submissions

 
We are currently accepting submissions of short stories set in and around the East Beach neighborhood. Start writing! The deadline is January 31, 2015. Anticipated publication is summer 2015.

ANTHOLOGY GUIDELINES


ELIGIBILITY

  • Members of the East Beach Writer’s Guild or residents of East Beach are eligible to submit.
  •  Submissions will be accepted between October 1, 2014, and January 31, 2015.
  • Each eligible person may submit up to two manuscripts. However, only one manuscript will be accepted in the initial round of review. Caveat: If we do not receive enough acceptable submissions, additional stories by the same author may be selected.
  • Each member who submits a manuscript agrees to promote and attend local book signings and events for the anthology.
  • 100% of proceeds will be donated to local charitable causes which support literacy. Charities will be determined by the East Beach Writer’s Guild
THEME

  • Submissions may be fiction or nonfiction, and must mention East Beach.
  • Stories must be between 1,500–5,000 words and must be an original story that has not been previously published.
  • Each author whose work is accepted for publication will be required to sign a contract. A sample contract will be provided upon request.
  • All submissions must portray the neighborhood of East Beach in a favorable light.
MANUSCRIPT

  • Manuscript(s), Cover Sheet and Biography will be submitted electronically using standard formatting (double-spaced, 12 pt. Times New Roman, one-inch margins). The manuscript may not contain the author’s name.
·       Manuscript

o   Each page will include the story title (e.g., EB, Where the Living Is Easy) and page number at the top left. It should not contain the author’s name.

o   Please ensure your word processing program does not embed the author’s name in the identifying information about the file. (In Word, go to File/Properties/Summary to remove author’s name).

o   Place ### after each scene change.

o   Place THE END or ### after the last line of your story.

  • Cover Sheet
    • Please include a cover sheet with the story title, word count, name, email address, street address, and phone number.

  • Author Bio
    • Please include up to a 100-word bio. Website and email address may be included if desired. Accepted authors can modify bio before book is published.

  • Submission
    • Send separate emails for each submission, each with 3 attachments: (1) Manuscript, (2) Cover Sheet, and (3) Biography to EBWGAnthology@verizon.net between October 1, 2014, and January 31, 2015. The subject line should read EBWG Anthology Submission.
  • Authors will receive email confirmation of submission.
  • Submissions that do not conform to these guidelines will be disqualified. The coordinating panel reserves the right to disqualify any manuscript for reasons that will be communicated to the author.
EDITORIAL PANEL

  • Editorial panel will recommend revisions to the author to make the manuscript more suitable for publication. Editorial panel may submit to the anthology.

If you have any questions regarding the anthology process, please contact Randi Klein, EBWGAnthology@verizon.net.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

EB Forum

Many thanks to our very own EBWG members Mike Owens, Lara Nance and Sally Parrott for a great presentation at the EB Forum - "What's Your Story?" - on Sunday afternoon.

They were all very informative, engaging, and entertaining!
R.Klein

Saturday, October 4, 2014

EB Forum

Don't forget the EB Forum this Sunday!
“East Beach – What’s Your Story?”
 
The East Beach Forum & The East Beach Writers’ Guild
co-host 
A Panel Presentation by
East Beach Authors
 
Sunday, October 5,
3:30 PM – 5:00 PM
Bayfront Club
 
Everybody has a story.  Are you ready to tell yours?
Whether writing to preserve a personal history to pass down through the generations or to make your millions as a New York Times Best Selling author, our panel of three published writers will inspire you with their suggestions.  The focus will be on the storytelling process and the writer’s life.
Admission is free, however seating is limited.
You can RSVP now to reserve your spot: eastbeachforum@gmail.com

Monday, September 22, 2014

The Threshold

Congratulations to Mike Owens on the publication of his latest book!

"What happens when a guy with a death wish gets caught up in a scheme to extend the human life span indefinitely?

Find out in The Threshold, now available in print and Kindle versions at Amazon."



Monday, August 11, 2014

August Meeting

Reminder!
August Meeting
9:00 AM, Friday, August 15
Presentation by our own Sally Parrott
"Show, Don't Tell"
 
Please bring your own beverage - munchies provided
 
 

Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Developing Characters

Many thanks to Mike Owens for his presentation, "Developing Characters."  He has graciously shared his slides with us.


    Building Fictional Characters
Presented by
Mike Owens

     “Great characters are the key to great fiction.” (Donald Maass)

    Preliminary Work: Roughing It In

    Story Type

  Classical (standard)

  Minimalist

    Classical Story Format

    Fully described characters

    Proactive

    External conflict

    Causality (coincidence is deadly)

    Character arc

    Minimalist Version

    Hemingway’s iceberg theory: 7/8 underwater

    Internal conflict

    Character more reactive than active

    No real denouement, reader must figure it out

    No real character arc

    Assigning Roles

    Protagonist (whose story is it?)

    Object of desire (what the character wants)

  Choose carefully: “Tell me what a character wants, and I shall tell you who and what that character is.”

    Obstruction/villain/conflict

    Who’s Going to Tell Your Story?
(Point of View)

    First person

  More character:reader intimacy

    Third person

  More flexibility, shifting POV among characters

    Second person, nope

    Omniscience, nope.

  Neutral POV, won’t work

    General Notes about Characters

    Homo fictus vs. Homo sapiens (James Frey)

    Fictional characters are bigger than life, so don’t use real people in your story.

    Still must be believable (and interesting)

    Using unlikeable characters

  Ex: The Beans of Egypt, Maine, Carolyn Schute

  The most important thing  is having a likeable narrator (Ethan Canin)

    Round vs. Flat Characters

    Round characters

  Fully developed, appearance, habits, motivation, etc.

    Flat characters

  Less important, appear once, then gone

    “And Mrs. Miff, the wheezy little pew opener—a mighty dry old lady, sparely dressed with not an inch of  fullness anywhere about her—is also here.” Dickens, Dombey and Son

    Stakes, Goals…Gotta Have Them

    Major source of conflict, desire vs. obstruction

    Thrillers…big stakes, apocalyptic, zombie hordes, and such

    Always be thinking, how can I make things more difficult for my character?

    Fictional characters head toward conflict, not away from it, and they don’t quit

    Stuff We Should Know

    The Laundry List

  Physiological, sociological, psychological elements

    What does he keep in the box stashed under his bed?

    What does she keep hidden in her closet?

    What are his/her habits? (consistency)

    Details Should Be Specific

    “Ms. Stafford lived alone. She always did her shopping on Tuesday morning, two hours on the button. That’s when Jimmy decided to go exploring. He started in her kitchen.”

    What did he find in her cupboard?

    Where Stuff Comes From

    Observation (journaling…great practice)

    Your own autobiography, family

    “You are going to love some of your characters because they are you or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some of your characters for the same reason.” Anne Lamott

    Still stuck? Write down the 10 times you were most afraid, most worried

    More Sources of Stuff

    Imagination/creativity…right-brain stuff

  Mostly hard work, discipline

  1% inspiration, 99% perspiration

  The Muse, and how to get it.

    Walk on the beach

    Music

    Meditation, yoga, etc

    Even with all this “stuff” you won’t really know your characters until weeks, even months after you’ve started working with them.

    Methods of Characterization

Indirect (telling)

     Authorial interpretation (Omniscient POV)   

Ex: “The woman walked into the room, kicked off her shoes, then took the gun out of her purse.”

   By another character

“She watched as he stopped in front of the mirror, straightened his tie, then admired himself for a long moment. She thought him the vainest man she’d ever known. How could she possibly be so attracted to him?”

    Methods of Characterization   

    Direct Methods

  Appearance

  Action

  Thought

  Speech (dialogue)

    Appearance

    A lot or a little (sometimes less is more)

    Stopping to describe a character also stops the forward momentum of the plot.

    Action  

    Our characters must act, not be acted upon

    “Passive protagonist” is an oxymoron

    Physical movement (stage direction)

    Action involves choice, moves plot forward

    Crisis action

    Thought

    Unique ability of the writer

    We can present thoughts, plans, schemes

    What character really thinks vs. what he or she says or does.

    Two friends meet on the church steps. “Good morning, Mrs. Jones. So nice to see you, and such a lovely outfit you’re wearing.” God, she thought, that dress must be a hand-me-down from her grandmother.

    Dialogue

    “Dialogue isn’t just conversation. It’s conversation’s greatest hits.”

    RULE: Dialogue must do more than one thing at a time

  Move plot forward

  Characterize speaker

    “One line of dialogue that rings true reveals character in a way that pages of description can’t.” (A. Lamott)

    Writing Dialogue

    Short sentences, avoid long speeches

    Don’t use dialogue to inform reader

  “As you know, Bob…” (info dump)

    Dialogue tags: only function is to identify the speaker (use “said”)

    Telling tags

    Tom Swiftys

    “We must hurry,” said Tom swiftly

    “Pass me the shellfish,” said Tom crabbily

    “I might as well be dead,” Tom croaked

    “We just struck oil,” Tom gushed

    “I wonder if this radium is radioactive?” asked Marie curiously

    “Bingo,” Tom exclaimed winningly